My latest literature creation... my new poem

If She Were Mine

Kiss her when I’m loving her,
Heed her when I’m broken down,
Feel her when I’m lonely,
Hold her when I’m fearful.

Touch her when I’m needing her,
Clutch her when I’m fallen,
Hug her when I’m chilly,
Tickle her when I’m joyful.

Tell her when I’m proud of her,
Seek her when I’m unseen,
Trust her when I’m plunging swiftly,
Dream her when I’m blissful.



Author: Jonathan Nathan



I’d rather call it a sonnet rather than a poem, because I used synecdoche. This effort is my best by far. I hope that it draws criticism as well as inspiration. It’s not perfect, but it’s fruitful. Feel free to suggest changes or new verses (your name will be accredited to it also), but send it to my email so that its easier for my to reply.

I'd Do This For My Gurl...

• KISS HER IN FRONT OF MY FRIENDS.
• TRUST HER 0VER EVERY0NE ELSE.
• TELL HER SHE L00KS BEAUTIFUL EVERY SINGLE DAY.
• LOOK INTO HER EYES WHEN I TALK TO HER.
• TELL HER STUPID J0KES T0 MAKE HER LAUGH.
• LET HER MESS WITH MY HAIR.MESS WITH HER HAIR.
• TAKE LONG WALKS ALONE WITH HER.
• INCLUDE HER IN ALL THINGS I DO.
• TELL HER THAT I VALUE HER OPINIONS WHEN I MAKE HARD DECISIONS.
• WHEN SHE CRYS DO WHATEVER IT TAKES TO MAKE HER SMILE.
• FORGIVE HER FOR HER MISTAKES.
• LOOK AT HER LIKE SHE'S THE ONLY GIRL I SEE.
• TICKLE HER EVEN WHEN SHE SAYS STOP.
• HOLD HER HAND EVEN WHEN WE'RE AROUND HER FRIENDS.
• WHEN SHE STARTS SWEARING AT ME, I’LL TELL HER I LOVE HER.
• LET HER FALL ASLEEP IN MY ARMS.
• WATCH HER SLEEP AND BE AMAZED BY HER BEAUTY.
• GET HER MAD, THEN KISS HER.
• TEASE HER & LET HER TEASE ME BACK.
• ALWAYS GIVE IN TO HER WHEN WE PLAY GAMES.
• WATCH ‘CHICK FLICKS’ WITH HER JUST BECAUSE SHE WANTS TO.
• STAY UP WITH HER ALL NIGHT WHEN SHE’S SICK.
• WATCH HER FAV0RITE M0VIE WITH HER OVER AND OVER AGAIN.
• KISS HER F0REHEAD AND TELL HER I CAN’T LIVE WITHOUT HER.
• GIVE HER THE WORLD AND MUCH MORE.WRITE HER LOVE LETTERS.
• LET HER WEAR MY CLOTHES.
• WHEN SHES SAD, COMFORT HER AND TELL HER THAT EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE.
• LET HER KN0W SHE'S VERY IMP0RTANT TO ME.
• LET HER TAKE ALL THE PH0T0S OF ME SHE WANTS.
• KISS HER IN THE RAIN.
• KISS HER UNDER THE STARS.
• CALL HER EVERY NIGHT JUST TO SAY ‘GOOD NIGHT AND SWEET DREAMS’.
• CARRY HER BURDEN WHEN SHE FEELS LIKE THE WORLD IS COMING DOWN ON HER.
• TAKE HER DARKEST NIGHT AND MAKE IT BRIGHT FOR HER.
• BE HER KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR.